N Zyme clearly takes this... more witty punches.. good personals.. structure/flow was on point etc..
Every catergory taken..
Killa.. sort out the structure first.. then try and add some witty personals to hit real hard..
Some decent attempts, but without a good flow your verse was virtually useless... cheetah/spot line was creative.. aim for similar..
Basically a very one sided battle..
For originality, structure, and witty punches..

Vote - N 'Zyme

yes^^ he basically said it all..just elevate aight?

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