first of all i hold this bitch, in the palm of my fist
wrip off his mic hand, and stitch up his wrist
^this is good multis i like the punch good opener....
you're a brittle bitch, your rhymes are as gay as skittles gitch
taste the rainbow prick, and a mouth-full of dick,
^and you lost it.....played sex lines vs Vets not a good combo....
grab your purse and your lipstick, head out and hook the corner
gettin pimped by Warner, wishin you were somewhere warmer
^wtf is this.....^^^^meh i think its filler sorry dog.....
Callin me out, jour mammie's callin you in, she wants you in bed by ten
cause by then you've lost 5 friends, dev doesn't really rap he just pretends
^like pick a topic........ehhe anyway ok punches stretched ass lines though...
better throw on some depends, i'm burnin the candle from both ends
I can't sleep, until i dispose of this mc, can't believe he went against me.
^weird rhyme scheme for a last bar......ok closer......


To me ya name says childish… ya spinn’n alotta shit
Yes..Your attempt at gangsta… hits like a chick flick
^eheheh nice punch.....kinda weak first line though....
Why’d ya accept to this bout… ya gettin knocked cold
Jus a fly in the heavy weight… a first round K.O.
^bah this has been done....not bad though
But I aint for self prop… no… jus heard your alias was slim
Cos ya punches hit that weak… don’t even bruise the skin
^i like the punch...good structure..nice call on the alias...
Ya need to grasp battling… what hits and what misses
But 1 outta 2 aint bad… now you can move on to the diss’s
^this is .....meh....ok punch...waiting for the boom still....
Spin, ya record jus amazes me… ill grant ya got consistency
0-0, so ill break it… put ya on the route to where ya skillz be
….pre-history
^ehhe there it is....nice closer....that line took it right there.....nice vote goes to dev no hate.....peep this ill topical vs. me and deacon later....

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