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Old 02-02-04, 08:33 PM   #2
Dev
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thought the scheme was a bit basic, but it carried ok... for a beginner,,, if you are.... it was far to short tho... cant fit anything into them... also ya syllables were a bit choppy and some of the wording, which knocked the flow,,, but jus work on it...............
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