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Flyweight
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IP:
I CAN'T VOTE less than 100 posts
I can ONLY give me -personal- input
Malice
The first punch was a nice opener,
nice multis, throughout the verse,
coulda use a lil mo vocab, wordplay etc
But overall a RESPECTABLE verse
Kuniva
I read the time and made a lil sense of your dis
(Nice)
decent multis, (might want to FORTIFY them)
Decent punchs (can ALWAYS be upped)
Overall STRONG verse
Close battle
Again I can not vote but if I could ....
(my personal vote goes to Malice)
Based on STRONGER multis, a few good punchlines, and overall flow
I felt each perspective
Keep it real
Keep doing your thing
JamesJr.
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