They say sticks and stones break your bones, but words may never hurt
If thats the case, Then whats the face, when words seem to do worse?
You say Your not fazed but thats the case when Your trying Stand Up
And Be something tough, When You Realize Your Door of Oppurtunity...
Has Shut
Lets get an identity, no two identical fingerprints, so Try to be Yourself
Because You can only pretend for so long, to being Someone Else...

^^.. Good Shit, way to start it off, thought the middle of your paragraph or wateva..lol, was basically all filler. thought the flow went down, and became choppy towards the end, the beggining part is what only stood out for me.... good shit, keep at it.. hit me back.