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Old 02-02-04, 08:51 PM   #6
Malice
Flyweight
 
Posts: 167
From: Nati
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Yo, I didnt like g3mstones structure at all, dawg u need to set it up a lil more clear. Punches really werent that hard either an flo was choppy, need to elevate a lot!

Jr. I liked ur puinches, an ur structure was pretty good, lackin a little vocab at tha end tho, u coulda closed a lot harder but i was still more intreted in your verse!

My vote goes to James, but good luck to both of u!
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