thought this was ok, nuthin special.... but still decent... krem your verse had a nice flow going with some decent wordplay.. the scheme seemed a bit basic inplaces, and the vocab could be better, but the overall content was good... Russie, your flow was a bit choppy... the vocab was pretty limited aswell, but again it was an ok read... the overall feel of it was good.... and i liked how you ended it..... like i said decent......