i liked this peice..nice flow and everything in it..gave great imagery made me feel as if i ere the phoenix myself...metaphors and everything was on point nice wordage used...didnt stray to other things..impressive peice baron..keep droppin

hit up my peices..with Me,Str8 Ace and jacent, Me and Str8 Ace,me and fl~0~metry

thx

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