damn myth fix your structure.......
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ill, im seaking to kill,u floppin still,u call u heat but all u send is a chill/
u a rapper ur a face-for-bags,u a mc u trully a disgrace-to-stages/
alright set up ...horrible 2nd line no punch....4/10
this a race-for-ages,u rhymes from a book, just whered u place-the-pages
recycling, your garbage YOU-SPREAD,u spit at me, then y the fuck r YOU-DEAD/
not too bad ... stick to a simpler rhyme scheme this one dont suit you well 5/10
u fall in the polls like "H-DEAN", im a myth but ur SPITs the thing rlly AINT-SEEN/
ILL-in-tear, myth comes hes still-in-fear, like ur reputation, i KILL-n-CLEAR
alright i'll give you 6/10 ...
change-directions,rearrange your-intenstines,u a mc, and ur still ASKING-4-QUESTIONS/
2-wrong, definetly not u thats 2-strong, u think u can beat me wit ur blues-song/
still not werkin for me .... 4/10 ... werk on punches man seriously...
FINISHER*

HEY, UNATIC, call u herb static, way wack sticks-2-u,call u a HO, the way dicks-go-2-u/
comin out of retirment,just 2 cant sent back 2 the WACK-PLACE,ill trace BACK-2-UR-DISGRACE, wit
lines like that, ur the sweet-victory w.o the TRUE-TASTE (think bout it)
ehh.....not feelin it ....poor verse.......i already know you lost your total was like 25 or somethin.....

ILL'S
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Ya flows an embarassment and ya mainly battle newbies
Restricted to MythikuL...wait.. Restricted Who? who's he
structure clearly superior ...good punch ... personal in there...7/10
Unheard of member, who's been registerd since June of 03
Oh G, i basically insult myself when callin you my homie
nother personal punch...nice multi attempt...7/10
You think your 3rd return makes you rememberable to RB
Hardly... even if ya spit razor punches, ya still couldn't harm me
again playin wit a multi ... a punch ..personal again ..8/10
Ya better wish theres life afta death, cuz your death is near
MythikuL stepped in fear, already knowin.... The End Is Here
decent 7/10 ....
Shit betta get Mohammad Ali ta throw ya punches, for help
Flow like a buttafly sting like a bee?? Fuck it.. He's just been delt
okay iguess.....coulda been werded better and its played....6/10

ILL obviously wins....by a very large margin.......
peace

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