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-Technician-'s verse
Who you think you are I drop the Bombz around here ......
tHE 15 minute time limit got this kid sweatin in fear ....
Another IJL victim ... I just Ko'd theunderated earlier ....
Now we got another challenger & he he actin gurlyier!....
Cant even come with a decent punch .... I believe my hunch
Beat you like theres 12 months ... a garuntee like phille makes them blunts
Truth is you'll get smoked like the herb that you really are ....
You bore people to sleep like you actually spit Sealy bars ...
Weapon of Mass Destruction but your sig lies to Rb's eyes.....
U aint nothin but consumption & addition to -Technician-'s pride
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Dope...
Good punches
Flow was straight
Structure was good..
Wordplay was decent
Multies were lacked...
Overeall.....13/20
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BombZ verse
Hit with full destruct, struct you once, and already your stuck,Forever ya' clutched, bruised lyricaly, used the bible and prayed to god,still couldn't win this miracally, runnin' into a plague of black death, facts is left but the acts of an ax to ya' head, pack of max flow, couldn't move me, thought it was facts? couldn't prove to be raw will skillz, 15 mins with 10 lines these laws I kill, ruthless I don't care, I leave you flat without a spare, clear and said, get near dread the scare of a pussy niggah who dared, so wheres the truth? Since youth I known, your act of cockiness and talent is all talk, cuz I don't see where its shown..
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...Flow was weird
Multies was tried..
Structure was gone to hell
Writtin like it was for audio..?
Idk... verse needs work...
Overall.......7/20
V/-Technician-
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