ill, im seaking to kill,u floppin still,u call u heat but all u send is a chill/
u a rapper ur a face-for-bags,u a mc u trully a disgrace-to-stages/
this a race-for-ages,u rhymes from a book, just whered u place-the-pages
^three line rhyme scheme this should be good.....its alot multis...ok punches...
recycling, your garbage YOU-SPREAD,u spit at me, then y the fuck r YOU-DEAD/
u fall in the polls like "H-DEAN", im a myth but ur SPITs the thing rlly AINT-SEEN/
^this is just multis are you gonna punch him or?........
ILL-in-tear, myth comes hes still-in-fear, like ur reputation, i KILL-n-CLEAR
change-directions,rearrange your-intenstines,u a mc, and ur still ASKING-4-QUESTIONS/
^this was a good line....lots of multis but a good punch ok wordplay...
2-wrong, definetly not u thats 2-strong, u think u can beat me wit ur blues-song/
^hmmmm no.....

FINISHER*.....<_______NO

HEY, UNATIC, call u herb static, way wack sticks-2-u,call u a HO, the way dicks-go-2-u/
comin out of retirment,just 2 cant sent back 2 the WACK-PLACE,ill trace BACK-2-UR-DISGRACE, wit
^this is a bad closer the rhymes scheme is off........also used a sex line....nough said,.....


Ya flows an embarassment and ya mainly battle newbies
Restricted to MythikuL...wait.. Restricted Who? who's he
^nice personal...punch good setup for punch...
Unheard of member, who's been registerd since June of 03
Oh G, i basically insult myself when callin you my homie
^hehe thats nice..gulit by association.....
You think your 3rd return makes you rememberable to RB
Hardly... even if ya spit razor punches, ya still couldn't harm me
^this has been done.....but its not that bad.....
Ya better wish theres life afta death, cuz your death is near
MythikuL stepped in fear, already knowin.... The End Is Here
^well this is nice....i like it a fine punch....
Shit betta get Mohammad Ali ta throw ya punches, for help
Flow like a buttafly sting like a bee?? Fuck it.. He's just been delt

^Nice closer.....a solid verse.....you took it with structure and flow...less multis to distract from your punches good battle though by both...hit up this ill topical guys...RETURN A FAVOR!!!!!!!!!

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