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Flyweight
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Ill shit....
IP:
Damn ......
That was some NICE shit.....
Good points:
Multies, punches(metas), flow, structure,
Criticism:
(Some want it to look neat in text form, others REALLY mean work on your structure)
2 things
1. if the flow goes with the beat DOPE let it slide... that's original
(don't let it slide too much)
2.You might find "fixing structure" in text makes it expand too
(so don't over look it either)
Work on the voab, (as ALWAYS FOR ANY EMCEE)
OVERALL
I lthought it was ill ....
keep doing it ..
JamesJr.
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