heres the breakdown....its possible to overuse vocab...and you did
a few times the flow fell off due to a word having more syllabuls in pronunciation than in spelling

My(1) actions(2) depicted(3) as evil(2) and I regret(4) my vengenance(3)/15
Repentance?(3) I put my(3) conscience(2) through death(2) sentence(2)/12

to keep the flow i had to really break down 'sentence'...might have come off better as 'sentences' add the extra syllabul

blah blah blah

good drop, just dont OD the vocab..and keep a closer eye on the flow
practice: say it slow and over pronounce the word...you can catch it easier that way

no go dig and find me drop!