yeah we all know this beat is real ill
this aint hate
but yo you need ta put more thought inta ya lyrics
too elementary
flow was not bad-it was straight
but keep workin on ya shit-people will at least listen if u got a good flow -thats jus how it is these days
and it was a lil short
but yeah
just keep workin
peep mines too yo
good lookin
gone
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