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i like da beat man, it suits tha message u trying to get across. ur voice cud use some work though. spit with more expression and u'll get better. u did sound like u read off paper but try n work on ya self a bit, it'll come. da lyrics are ok and da meaning behind it all woz good. like i feel wot u woz trying to say. keep working and u'll get better..not bad for a first spit..
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"First we lost Eazy, then we lost Pac
Biggie got killed when the shit gon' stop"
Layzee Bone, Change Tha World
"With every dark night, there's a bright day after that"
Tupac Shakur, Me Against Tha World
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