Till Eye Die's verse..fairly good..not the greatest..some punches..none too great..none that really shined..you need to put more creativity in them and try to get some personals..the flow was good..that was average also..opener wasnt the greatest..but not to bad to come into a battle..closer was ehhh..I give your verse a 6/10

D Realist's verse...kind of weak..hercules punches are played..and "verbally kick you"?..that was weak..verse had alot of weak punches and failed attempts of personals..flow was messed,but not horrible..need to work on that..structure was like *swoosh*<--not a good thing..opener was garbage..the closer was the best line..keep elevating ..I give this verse a 4/10

till eye die gets my vote..

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