you 0-3 that's a shame, i even got more losses
you aint even got a win yet, you kno wuts more worthless
Not a very strong opener, and losses and worthless didnt rhyme together
i could use the force, but i don't need shit to dead you
and tell fantazee, you can't get that bitch to have sex with you
Never did like it when the lines ended in the same word, punch wasnt that great
your a waste of trash, but still i'll throw you out
a ghostly image it takes one breath to blow you out
Decent punch, liked the 'ghostly image' play on
sorry to dissapoint, your bars are wut did it
so choppy and messed up, it looks like a sars exibit
You coulda made this a better punch if you changed up the 1st line, liked the idea
u startin with the man, so be ready to book
cutastraphe ghost and my machete are hooked
OK closer, nothing too fancy, but it works


lovein the college pussy, so it was a nice suprise u pre-med
ya words, a pre-cog against a 0-3 head thats already dead
Nice
said u didnt have time but howm i supposed to know when ur
constantly on invisible mode, too slow to comprehend my birds?
here have another,flipin more words then ggw camera and girls shirts
cut never had a full 10 so hes lost for anything close s unfamilliar turf
Didnt really care for the structure here, punches were shadowed by the poor structure
apparently as i tryed turnin the outcome on u, found ya face doom[peepavatar]
i cut him the face, ast him rap he? gushed red handed, rep ruined
I was lost here
Ghostie instill in mc my realness, be that a factor when you hearing sets of booing
im tryna book u in the system of the best, but found out ur just documental movies
makin u a docoumental history
This would have been a great ending punch, but in my opinion you should have tried to make just 2 lines and rhymed something with history or something...good idea, creative


Overall - Hard to decide on this one, so i looked at the mistakes and re-read it and decided that Ghostie got this one. Not by much, but he brought a lil more to the table. Vote: Ghostie .. peace