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both flows were aight, flash u'r structure is alil messed up, but not that bad that it can't be fixed. work on that, and the punches, seemed like u was just dissin him with hate disses, no good punches or personals. cam u'r flow was pretty good, and u had more personals that hit, just try to be more creative. vote-cam
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Produce rhymes so sick, like bird droppings on ur head passin
The shit slides down ur face, flash.. are you Micheal Jackson?
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uhh ok flow, and wordplay, good imagery i guess, punch was weak
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livin for killin these kids, these scripts be written in sigs....
only 'flow' that you know is the 'spit'-in ya bib
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good flow, nice wrdplay, ok punch.
flash try to keep ya couplets seperated, also use less vocab and more punches. verse was coo, just didn't have the personals.
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