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Old 02-03-04, 03:16 AM   #10
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okay..a below average battle..

cut..your verse bar didnt rhyme that well..it was forced..punches wasnt at large in this battle. and it shows in your second bar..only bar I did like was the ghostly line..flow was decent..not too great..not too bad either..try to even up your lines a lil more..they dont have to be perfect..but,..that cant be all stretched..

ghostie..you put up a good battle..I was really expecting you to lose..which in my opinion you did..but let me explain why..your punches was..forced..all of them..it's like..that birds line..wtf do that mean?..I coulnt even comprehand your birds and that line that you tried to make with parts of his name in it made your verse worse..bar structure was better than Cut's..thats the only thing you beat him in..

my vote..Cut

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