flash wrecked this. he was just too much. complex rhyme scheme. i write poetry so i appreciate that. its hard to do with no beat. but good job. punches were there vocab and all was tight.
camrok used a lot of gay and mj meta's so it took away. cam look around rb and most rappers who lose use on ro two of those things. bad idea. been tried like too much.
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