the first thing, is the flow, lyric yours was pretty consistant, set ya punches up decent... Cut, yours was ok, but the cap's shit n explaining throws ya a bit.... also you had some ok punches, but the execution could have been better... lyric, your punches were better, harder hittin and more consistant, with better personals... overall my vote goes Lyric, just the overall verse was more thought out, easier to read and harder hittin....vote=Lyric..... .......decent battle...