Yo sound like a deep voiced Nas. I dont know what it is about this that i dont like. I think its the actuall delivery, you not off beat, but you like, iono. The delivery is wierd. Sound like you need to drink some water or your 76 yrs old..ha, jokes.
This wasnt that bad man, add some dubs, and adlibs, and you should be straight
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