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Old 02-03-04, 10:02 AM   #4
Timeless
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yea ya all came nice, all the verses complimented eachother.

Lm = really good flow as with all ya spits,
thought you could of made it a bit more complex
with more vocab or wordplay, but to be fair to
you that is your style of spittin. still really good tho! 8/9 out of 10

freeman = wow, flow,vocab,wordplay and topic,
a great peice with an unusual style.
thats something new i aint seen before . keep it up. 9/10

K = you also had nice flow not as good as Lm but good.
thought your vocab woz well executed, and ya also had
some nice wordplay. 8/9 out of 10

overall = all came very well, nice piece for instant. overall = 8/9 out of 10

breakdown

flow = Lm
vocab=freeman
wordplay=k
lines=freeman

fave line = Elevating be-ond belief..your disbelief …has no pass on affect,
Cause why should I give a fuck what you think…Im doing it for self-respect,

please return the favour and vote on the battle under my sig.
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