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Old 02-03-04, 11:07 AM   #12
Brethren
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From: Michigan
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you 0-3 that's a shame, i even got more losses
you aint even got a win yet, you kno wuts more worthless
Weak opener, used filler
i could use the force, but i don't need shit to dead you
and tell fantazee, you can't get that bitch to have sex with you
Alright
your a waste of trash, but still i'll throw you out
a ghostly image it takes one breath to blow you out
Decent punch
sorry to dissapoint, your bars are wut did it
so choppy and messed up, it looks like a sars exibit
Rhymed choppy, but good concept
u startin with the man, so be ready to book
cutastraphe ghost and my machete are hooked
Decent closer


lovein the college pussy, so it was a nice suprise u pre-med
ya words, a pre-cog against a 0-3 head thats already dead
Garbage
said u didnt have time but howm i supposed to know when ur
constantly on invisible mode, too slow to comprehend my birds?
Wak
here have another,flipin more words then ggw camera and girls shirts
cut never had a full 10 so hes lost for anything close s unfamilliar turf
Flip some multis next time
apparently as i tryed turnin the outcome on u, found ya face doom[peepavatar]
i cut him the face, ast him rap he? gushed red handed, rep ruined
Decent personal
Ghostie instill in mc my realness, be that a factor when you hearing sets of booing
im tryna book u in the system of the best, but found out ur just documental movies
decent
Good job keeping it creative, but your other stuff was played

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