yo homie, this was aiight piece, jus like LM n WD-40 said, this was good fo a keystyle but if it wasnt then u need to elevate n improve jus like im tryin 2 do right now. but overall i liked it... the flow was there...vocab was basic but u used in firery ways..so jus work sum more n u be on ur way to da top
N please return de favor n drop feedback on mine
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111845
Peace