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Old 02-03-04, 12:21 PM   #18
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delivery- you had the better punchlines and a nice use of wordplay in this battle.. you could have improved some of your flow though.. you had a lot of stretched lines.. your battle had some decent disses.. i give your verse a 6.5/10

child prodigy- your battle verse was really newbiesh.. you could improve alot in adding better more creative disses in your verse.. i got a feeling from your verse that you didnt ty hard enough man improved dude i give your verse a 4.5/10

vote- dlivery for the better wordplay and disses

hit this battle up its been up for weeks and it needs to be closed niggas here the link to the post
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=110730&page=2
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