Gotta say Underrated as well...

Although that "Listen to" hook began to drill into my head like a bad hangover!!!

He still came more complex and provided better imagery.

Used the more complex vocab and topic...

And presented it with some decent flow.

Nothing dramatic, nothing Legendary, but enough to win.

Deacon threw entirely different than I've ever seen before.

The result was a very emotional and heartfelt piece.

I can tell ya cared alot for her, or at least ya character does.

The imagery lacked, though...

I know nothing about this chick other than her bad habits and loose pussy.

What's she look like? What color hair is reflecting in the coke mirror?

What's your relationship to her, ya care, I got that, but why?

She a sister, a friend, someone you used to fuck?

Great story, good emotion, but lacked details and left me wondering...

Why should I care?

Underrated wins for me...

Peace

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