Nice Topical Here......Deacon Came Pretty Dope In Some Parts....But Your Opening Kinda Slacked Off...But You Did Much Better Throughout Your Verse, You Had Good Points Of Views And Good Concepts.......And Under Stuck With The Topic, Nice Imagery And Concepts....And Had Emotion Pretty Much All Throughout His Verse....Which Is What Gives This To Him In My Opinion...For Having A Better Thought Out Topic.....You Should Join SS Under....

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