Flyweight
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IP:
This is how I see this one.
Flow=God, he had much better structure on this one. Baz, you still need some work on your structure, it'll help your flow out a lot.
Punches=God, he had more punches that hit a bit harder. Baz, work on doing direct punches, you need to have punches that hit a bit harder.
Personals=Baz, I didn't see any real personals in Gods verse and Baz at least attempted to use personals, both of you still need to work on personals, good personals are very affective.
Vocab=God, you both need to work on this, good vocab can really help out. Baz you used some pretty basic vocab, work on your vocab.
Over all=God, you had some okay punches, and a nice flow, but you need to work on the other aspects of your battles. Keep at it and you should get there.
Baz, your structure was a bit better than it was before, but it still could use some work, you should also work on your punches, personals even though you did use some, and your vocab, but keep working at it and you should get there.
Vote=God
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