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Old 02-03-04, 03:08 PM   #22
Ambitious
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thos was close........i dont feel like breakin it down line by line

illusiunist: u verse had me laughin bro.....some funny punches.......and personals...but you had some fake personals to....smokey the bear had me laughin out loud in class and shit.......but overall through your wordplay....metas....strucutre and punches and shit i'd give you a 14/20 ....good verse.... definitely worth tne read...

underated: you verse had good punches as well....good personal/punches....liked how you got at his name and avy...didnt quite get the avy one tho....you had nice metas.2 ...i like that xlg line alot....good witt there......your wordplay was nice too.....this was a very good battle......I'm going to have to agree with the above posters....and say underated won....
i think he edged out ILLusionist with harder punches.....Better personals.....ILL
'some or urz were made up.....but still funny and witty.y.....all in all

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