Sharp Perfection.
From: HELL!!....and yet you think im jokin |
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interesting it was, and it kinda twisted at the very end, a bit. one thing watch spelling and grammar. also the rhyme scheme seemed a bit over done and forced at times, try making it more natural. flow was alright, structure and vocab were basic.
~Tera~
DONT HATE
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R.I.P to my lost girl
~ Nyla ~
keep singing in heaven
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