well i just posted up a breakdown... the damn thing fucked up.....so aint gonna do one again.... i thought this was a good drop.... sounds familiar... but it was... the main thing i wasnt keen on was the opening of the first 2 lines, seemed like a bit of a filler... thats my opinion.... but ya had a good scheme,,, also i thought the first bar's rhyming sounded a bit too similar... but you stayed pretty consistant thru...... thought the flow was pretty smooth too, with a good amount of syllables...... sorry its short, but im sick of repeating what i wrote like 5 mins ago, before it fucked up......keep em rolling
........didnt realise that it was a collab.... the something, something... took my eyes away from potent... sorry