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Old 02-03-04, 04:00 PM   #18
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battle was pretty much one sided.. puertoricanelly your verse was a bunch of talk.. you didnt really have any punchlines or wordplay that win you battles.. youve got potentials but this battle verse didnt have those many punchlines

brethren- you had some nice personals in here.. i liked your first couple of lines where you were going off bout buritos.. disses were on point.. wordplay was sharp and your verse was overall consistently ill though out

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