I liked this one to a point really nice imagery which plays a big part....Good vocab you definitly know how to use a dicionary ...or have gottten a pretty extensive education....wasn't feeling the flow of this one mainly because of your rhyme scheme...but when i say wasn't feelin i am cmparing it to the when the condom broke one which i liked alot more than this one....but for what it was it was nice good use of the topic plz peep the open mic lyrical fitness....wise ways and underrated...
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