strucuture-LM
flow- LM
punches- smiley
creativity- smiley
multis- smiley
metas-smiley
personals-Tie
LM- Your shit had good flow. Your opener an closer were both pretty creative. Sub par Tiger Woods line was played. Its just your punches in between the opener an closer were kinda weak. They didnt really connect with any force.

Your verse was desent, nothing too special. First of all ya structure could use some work, it was all over the place. Punches were pretty good. I liked the opener, nice personal. Mulis were killin it. Prime ape line was pretty good. Some lines were kinda wack tho like - "WHY SHOULD I BATTLE WITH YOU AND WASTE MY TIME
ILL PUT A GUN IN YOUR 'MOUTH' AND LITERALLY MAKE YOU TASTE MY NINE" Not a good punch.
OVERALL-

gets my vote because his verse was just more creative and had harder punches. I was still pretty close
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