..WoW...once again I'm truly amaze by your style...this line was probaly the best line I've read on this site...Baron your imagery on this piece was out of this world..just the opening alone made it worth the read..

"Delivering a fine display, as he glided past kids
Wings stretched to Showcase his aerial dynamics"

^I can picture this in my head and it gives me a little smile...your flow was as always consistent...and you probaly have the best scheme I've ever seen...(one question..why you suck at audio???...LOL...J/K)...this was just simply amazing.....take care...(I'm still wating for you to read my piece and share your thoughts....^^)