Yea this was real good, to bad u had so many homo reply's so im going to be nice, ..

U started this off very good, the foundation for your ' story ' was executed very nice, the different parts, as in the beginning , .. & the end was real dope .. the content of your story enjoyed me it attracked me...so props on that not many people do that w/ an Om, .. the indepth always is missing, seems but you keep that in it.. so its all good..now your vocab was good, like ur flow.. & the sheme of rhymes, was olso not simplistic, so iunno what to say about this.. ne more, .. i liked it .. =) .. Good story ..

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