Tele takes this one..
K your verse had played shit (herb/spliff wordplay, mean shit-to-me)
didnt hit hard....and just didnt come straight....it was so fucking iffy the whole time and ntohing hit direct and really punched well. seems you used the ... structure in innapropriate places as well.
Tele u came straight....i liked the cling on punch... u punched harder and used original disses and creative rhymes....also used the correct structure.

vote Tele

both of you please hit up my tag battle. its real good, just gettin mad slept on

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111240