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Old 02-03-04, 04:53 PM   #15
menolin
\/ pissing me off!!!!
 
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From: UK
IP:

yo the only time you got lyrics to shock..is if you
........stick your keyboard in the electric.........
looked up the definition of your name phissically moveing,
......well that definetly aint telekinetic.........
nice play on his name

little bitch you takeing the piss man?..i aint never even heard of-you,
fuck splitting this newb in half..i'd rather take a third of-you,
filler, not the worst punch ever, but pretty bad

the only reason you're calling out a vet.............
.............is cause your a pet in need.........
cause to be honest man....ive seen better looking deseace,
wordplay let you down here

but anyway congratulations on being my 45th vic-tory,
pm'ing me a picture of poo...is the only way you'll ever meen shit-to-me,
pretty wack, nice idea though

im solid as a rock with my text..so just try and move-me.
im embarissed of merking this prick..cause ive smoked,
......better herbs in a doo-bee(splif).....
played

but like i said in the line above..really its a easy merk,
i wished you luck twice before this^..and it still didn't work.
not the best of closers



Your lyrics aren't raw they're overrated translated to overcooked*
This guy was fishin for the win............ but never baited the hook
haha, nice

Now ya booked as a spectacle now one line you throw in the towel
Try to front but ya wackness is more flagrant than a technical foul
i heard something like this before, wordplay let you down

You stay fowl......
Even with bars stretched ya prospect of winning seems farfetched Bring ya dick riders, I know ya got more "cling ons" than star trek
too stretched, flow was off, wack punch

Your a pain in the neck, small in my world your just a plain speck
A train wreck for structure an outta talent "you need a rain check?
not your best, not your worst

K's UK style is hopeless a mess broke like electronic glass devises
Guy's skills on a downward spiral an flaws risin like US gas prices
nice punch, hit pretty hard

Ya lines bite.....
Your design mite-a had a shot in the dark but lost ya rhymes light
Wits collide an minds ignite but ya fight is tiny like ya lines might
wat the fuck, you lost me



punche tie both had some good, bad an aiight ones
personals tele nice play on the hooked
strucutre k nice structure
flow k
metas tie

my vote tele
his personal hit hard, an he got a few good shots,
.:K:. i aint seen you come this weak for quite a few battles now!!


both y'all try an hit, one or two of the battles in my sig up, thanks peace
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