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IP:
-Smoke-'s back, spittin fire with a black-tongue,
Menolin bit my style, so he left with black-lungs...
tellin me "you nicer than some peeps on this site, I peeped you"...
damn right menolin, and that includes you...
-Smoke-'s no joke, givin out all L's so dont show up,
where there's -Smoke- there's "fire", so when I spit atcha, ill dry ya "flow" up...
under ya name, reads "still the same",
your manure, i guess some things "never change"...
this verse ends it for this bastard,
Menolin! the UK's version of viagra...
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i would haave too say that this was ok,and thatsabout it so
homie you had some punches but i felt they came choppy
and ya structure was off too,whats with the up being 1 line
any ways 5/10 ratio,next time have better directed personals
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you got my name wrong... no need to dazzle you with punches,
now-a-days newb and wack.... come tied together in bunches,
i don't toke back herb...... but i still manage to 'smoke' this kid,
his punches never direct... he spits with the neck of an invalid,
your that unlucky piece of grass, that this dog chose to shit on,
dont do audio, cos you couldn't blow up wax explosive crayons,
i destroy you with a 15 minute key... watch as i unlock the win,
i jus keep bowling him over............ like he one of alley pins,
come harder next time... be 'only the weak' dont survive,
you should be counting you beats, they is jus keepin you alive.
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aight this was pretty good,more of a vet mentality went into this
had some decent punches that were directed soley to his oponent
nice structure,and flow was more consistant in this wordplay but 8/10
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vote/Manolin
hit up one of my threads in my sig please since i took the time man,thank you
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