Thread: Typo vs CAMROK
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Old 02-03-04, 04:56 PM   #12
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man i wish i could just break this batttle down in categories cuz i feel it was one sided

typo- you came with some decent lines.. nothing that really hit hard though.. you had alot of filler in your rhymes like that line bout being able to make mollases slick.. dont put lines like those in your verse those arent disses.. and your punchlines were weak.. your wordplay was mediocre.. i aint really see any mulites thrown in your verse your shit was just average

camrok- you had some clever lines in this battle "Im'a delete this typo, give his rep a reduction
I'll take out his fat ass like lypo-suction "

"Today hasn't changed, this rhymes bullying ya now
You couldn't "Stand Up" if Ludacris showed you how"

these are the type of punchlines that win you battles.. and those lines and the rest of your verse had nice disses in there

vote- camrok
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