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weezy
Listen... Ya rhymes out of date so they gettin' expired/
Your Words couldn't get hot if I set 'em on fire/
played, 4/10

Call me dragon only thing that im Spittin' is flames/
This cat should lose, For the simple fact "THING" is his name/
first line wakc, second decent attempt, 5/10

out of commission my punchlines should be call knock out lines/
one personal hit 'em hard put him out for some time/
too simple, 5/10

yeah i know 0-3 my record isnt the best/
But you wouldn't know you was speakin' bull if it took a shit on your chest/
filler, hardly a punch 4/10

You in the worst state your plot is thickenin' quick/
you'll pack in a casket like a box of chicken wings/ HOLD DAT!!!(sike)
yeh this ryhmed, 3/10

overall 21/50

you came soft, hardly anything hit, jus keep elevating kid!!

thing
You Say Your From "Where Ever You Not From...But Why
Shits So Incohearent That You Should Just Simply Die
pretty weak, 4/10

Kid Trys To Make His Verse Look Better By Adding A "/"
But Thats As Herbish As Thinking You Could Win A Thing
first line was a decent attempt, 5/10

I'mma Disinagrate Ya Roots From the Herb Garden Then Sing
So Now When You Try To Survive You Wont Cuz No Soil
aiight, 5/10

Your Worst Than A Rich Famalies Daughter...So Spoiled
This Horrible Addtrosaty Hasent Even Won A Single Battle
weak, 4/10

And This Fact Literally Stays The Same As I Complete My Bar
Your Verse Had The Consistancy Of Uglyness Just Like Tar
again weak, 4/10

overall 22/50

you had a big structure problem, then jus fix that an elevate!!

my vote thing

plz hit up the battles in my sig, one or the other, thanks