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Old 02-03-04, 05:27 PM   #10
LyRiCaL GeEnUs
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-Smoke-'s back, spittin fire with a black-tongue,
Menolin bit my style, so he left with black-lungs...
decent
tellin me "you nicer than some peeps on this site, I peeped you"...
damn right menolin, and that includes you...
weak
-Smoke-'s no joke, givin out all L's so dont show up,
where there's -Smoke- there's "fire", so when I spit atcha, ill dry ya "flow" up...
whaknes
under ya name, reads "still the same",
your manure, i guess some things "never change"...
weak
this verse ends it for this bastard,
Menolin! the UK's version of viagra...
played as fuck


you got my name wrong... no need to dazzle you with punches,
now-a-days newb and wack.... come tied together in bunches,
decent
i don't toke back herb...... but i still manage to 'smoke' this kid,
his punches never direct... he spits with the neck of an invalid,
ok punches and personals
your that unlucky piece of grass, that this dog chose to shit on,
dont do audio, cos you couldn't blow up wax explosive crayons,
[bkinda weak man][/b]
i destroy you with a 15 minute key... watch as i unlock the win,
i jus keep bowling him over............ like he one of alley pins,
lol whack
come harder next time... be 'only the weak' dont survive,
you should be counting you beats, they is jus keepin you alive.
nice metas and punch

Menolin takes this pretty easy..good stuff. SMoke started off codd with his first bar, but then fellof after that. He came with too many played and unoriginal punche. Menolin had a decent overall verse which was more than enought for the win.
Please peep this honestly guys,shits been open forever. Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110074