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MichaelCorleone
I'm cold hearted assasin with these lyrics i'm blastin
You tryin to rap battle but nigga in this thang you ain't lastin
Call you self drinx but you a phony like kool-lite to kool-aid
tha only thang you drink is nut when dicks in you mouth start to spray
but aint' gotta say you gay for you to no you stands no chance against me
I looked in ya profile in ya own hood nigga you has no history
Niggas say you be spittin but that just be but the nut you throw up
I might battle you again but like in ten years when you growup
You never stood a chance like kids thats to young to walk
Yo heard tha name corleone nigga now you outlined by chalk
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To basic..
The outlined by chalk shit is so old
Everyone has used that ... its wack
Flow was decent, vocab was weak
Structure was good..Punches were soft
Personals were lacked.... overall....10/20
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Drinx
Bastard guess what, ur my Target, my array of raps will literally take out ur garbage
im shitting on so many kids my verses come with their own rolls of charmin
my style is vicious while ya rhymes layin in the dumps, i got no flaw
u a pussy cause when it come to kombat ma words throw bullets like terry bradshaw
my punches keep landing..until u bruised n have the worst face
u'll always place 2nd..cuz u got no flow n cant rap in the first place
Fuck ya Roots, even ifu got help from biggie ull never have this vet shook
and as for this bitch,he aint eva gettin signed like stevie wonders check book
ur catchn the end of my rath, u must feel crummy...pretty damn bad
left this pussy bloody..hand him a tampon..cause he aint worthy of a PAD
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Structure needs help
Flow was good.. punches hit decently hard
Vocab could use work, wordplay was good
Personals were decent, could use work..
Somewhat creative... didnt use weak concepts
Overall.. decent verse.... 14/20
V/DrinX
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