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Old 02-03-04, 06:09 PM   #8
Holmes Jr.
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Penskills i may be new but please take my feedback just as seriously as anyone elses, I thought this was very ill. Flow was perfect as far as I could tell, i never choked when i was spittin it out loud.. Not only were the multis placed well but your mature vocab would make it difficult for most mc's to find that many words to rhyme, nicely done there...the concept was a little freaky but that makes it all the better, and i always love the multiple viewpoints spits they are so fuckin cool. Bloodthirsty imagery was well done..overall 9/10 please keep it up cos I love your shit!!
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