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Flyweight
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IP:
Ok
honestly.....???
I think they are both newbish and both could use work.
However that doesn't mean I didn't like it
I'll do it text book
Machaveli
open: 3
(work on)
close: 3
(kinda frail work on)
personals: 0
(def. workon)
metas: needs work
punches: needs work
multis: 7
(they were there just up'em a lil)
also try to fix up your stucture a lil
even you lines out
Keep back rawer next time!
Props
MCrepresenta
open: 6
(nice )
close: 2
(was a lil dissappointed after the opener)
personals: 2
(neither of you really took (personal) shots out at eachother )
metas: needs work
punches: 2
multis: 6
Also MC nice structure
win:MCrepresenta
(I can NOT officially vote so no whining, jk)
personal opinion;
based on most of that
Flow - MC, was structured better, which made it flow and sound better to me
Punches -, some were played by both cats or lacking
Multies - Obviously MC, by his type of rhyme scheme, his rhyme scheme almost always guarantees him flow and multies. If your a newb take a close look and you'll see.
Vocab - Both were lacking on this
Overall they were alright verses
Keep elevating as ALWAYS
Return the favor and give me some honest feedback on any one of my links
JamesJr.
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