Potent.. Very nice verse, good take on your point of view and a good take on the vocabulary, flow, and overall dopeness. Good use of multies, making it easy to read, but not overdoing it either. Very Nice Put together verse, Which you packed well with imagery and an overall great use of your words, and some good as hell metaphors..
R.T, you put up a nice hook, nothing I can say bad about, very good hook.
Edicius.. Very Nice opening lines..Fucking dope, And though your structure was long as hell, You put up some dope metaphors, and Very Nice way to express your message.
The Writer's voice was definately evident in both verses, and You guys always compliment each others styles, which is dope.
Dope Piece..

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