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Old 02-03-04, 07:39 PM   #21
Se7eN
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of course this is the way I saw the battle

Structure-Tie, Both came wit weak structures and that's that, u need to work on structures

Vocabulay-Hard, cause his shit made since and was nice words that weren't so plain and used

Punches and Wordplay-Hard, cause his shit wasn't so newbish like yours was Machevelli, and you need to up too dawg, well both of ya'll need to elevate on these two categories

Flow-Tie, nothing more to same I summed this up like I did with Structure, both were weak

Conclusion-Both need to elevate alot and then come wit some better shit next time, but I enjoyed this newbish kinda battle......sike, ya'll need to elevate alot........

Vote=Hard Hitter

HARD HITTER HIT MY BATTLE UP (THE ONE IN MY SIG) WIT A HONEST VOTE DAWG SINCE I TOOK TIME ON YOURS
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