great peace. i love how you told the story and broke it down the way you did. really cool idea for an open mic, i like shit where it takes you through exactly what someone was thinking, in this case...writing. good shit man. by the end i kind predicted what was gonna happen, but still had a good affect none the less. moral of the story? dont take what you have for granted, before its too late...
thast what i got out of it at least. nice drop.