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Flyweight
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IP:
Just giving honest opinion, return the fav
I won;t go line for line
I'll do it text book
Unknown Skillz
open: 4 (attempted punchline) make em a lil more venomous
close: 4 (again make em more venomous) esp opener/ closer/
personals: 4 (only one attempt to personally rip)
metas: 2 (didn't really see any)
punches: 3 (the opener was an attempted punchline/ personal) more venom it would
multis: 5 (decent multies, makes the flow of the song go better
additional point : Work on you're struture (more internal shit be4 the multies etc. ) it''ll make those punchies, personals and multies hit aLOT harder.......
Mad love for dropping the verse....
MC aines
open: 6 (nice open) I'll explain 6 in a min
close: 6 (nice ended) half way got my "personal vote" there w/ just open and close
personals: 3 (few personals) good had more detailed but I feel on lack of info .bio
metas: 5 ( few metas) Ilike this one
""DEATH" is getting "beat-kids-habit" cause this "Bia" is "slipping" like i "greased" this FAgGET "
punches: 5 ( few good punches) we can already see who's gonna win
multis: 8 (lotsa good multies) strong point
Need to even out the barsa bit, it'll help and add more to the details
win: MC aines "personal vote" "if I had A 100 NOW I';d give it to him"
Based on all those points
Vocab - Both were lacking on this, and need to elevate
But everyone ALWAYS needs to elevate
Don't take it personal or the worng way
I liked both verses
but had to give it to MC aines
keep it real
stay up
Return the favor and give me some HONEST feedback
JamesJr.
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